Poetry on Thursday

It would have been my mother's 86th birthday last week so I've been thinking about her more than usual. She died when she was 67, and it felt like this poem was written for her (and me with its countless oddly similar details). It's more like a story a typical poem, it is very long, and I considered not sharing it but no other poem felt right once I read this one by Barbara Kingsolver. (My apologies in advance.)

My Mother's Last Forty Minutes

Barbara Kingsolver

At three in the afternoon we heard the death rattle,

sound of a throat that can't clear itself anymore.

This was the cue for another drop of morphine, or not,

according to a nurse's advice my sister and I tried to

reconstruct, as earnestly as we used to kneel together

to build our fairy houses of tree bark and moss. We'd

slept almost not at all for a week, and between us now

constructed no clear game plan on the morphine.

Really, death rattle was all I kept thinking. As if

the den of this ranch house smelling of sickroom

and dust, with its flotsam of Kleenex boxes,

its rented hospital bed and oxygen machine, its frugal 

postwar windows and chronic gloom, had received 

a surprise visitor and it was Charles Dickens.

     May I say that life is filled with instructions

we just don't believe we are ever going to need?

My father announced he had checks to deposit, so 

was going to the bank. My sister and I locked eyes,

the old familiar rope of the drowning child. She

suggested to him that he might regret his timing.

I followed him outside. This is my family job, to say

the ungentle thing. Taking it for the team. I yelled

at him briefly. Then apologized. We were none of us

quite in our minds and anyway, who was I to judge?

As far as I knew he hadn't spent a night or a day

away from my mother in something like half

a century, while I was off living my own merry life,

had merely put it on hold for a couple of weeks

to come and help out with the dying-at-home-

with-no-hired-help request.

     Again, I'll step out

of that room to warn the unwitting: it's a big ask.

My father came back inside. The three of us

sat in chairs arranged like planets around our sun.

She hadn't spoken in days, or opened her eyes,

yet her gravity held us. Though not completely.

I'd noticed Dad now shifting his gaze, staring in 

love and wonder at the 12 x 14 portrait of my mother

gorgeously veiled as a twenty-year-old bride, which 

he's set on the mantle to pretty up this departure.

The rain picked up. This storm was something else,

some wild stampede on the roof of my childhood

home. But she seemed shipshape, fresh cotton gown,

no furrows of pain on the pale crepe of her brow.

I took my phone out to the sunporch to update our

brother. I'd barely spoken when a bolt of lightning

struck the house. Zipped right down a metal duct 

an arm's reach away from me. I dropped the phone.

Took a moment. My heart, still beating.

The house, utterly silent. The electricity had gone

out, which made things seem peaceful.

I remembered oxygen. That she would suffocate.

I hurried back to the den where my sister and I 

in treble octaves discussed the emergency

backups. Then noticed my mother was breathing

on her own. She hadn't done this since last winter.

Around half-past, a shuddering little house-quake

brought the power back on. We breathed.

My mother's pulse-oxygen, measured by a device

pinched on her finger—a number we watched

like the basketball scores, like the polls before

an election—had plunged to the failure zone. Now

with machine assist she rallied back into the nineties.

Dean's List. All her life, that's where she liked to be.

This might be the moment to step one last time 

from the bedside to mention that while we spoke kindly,

mostly, my mother and I did not love one another.

Ever, not even when I was a baby—as I've lately learned

from letters she wrote her friend from a cold plywood

house in Annapolis where I crawled u her legs and

drove her nuts, where she begged my two-year-old brother

to look after me, wished Dad would come home

from the navy and they could zoom away from us

in their aquamarine Chevrolet.

When women are instructed to bear children,

we don't think of such possibilities.

That we are on our own here. There is no Dean's List.

The blessing is that later, in better times, she had

another daughter. I cherished my sister, too; it's no fault

of hers that lightning only strikes once. I would be

the unspeakable first failure that stuck in my mother's 

throat, the child who would never be gentled,

or allowed to touch her good things, or even allowed to

take her to lunch, but could take the rap, the bad daughter.

However I might hold myself to the good of my own life,

the too-many lovers, the eventual sweet husband, 

the daughters more necessary to me than my two eyes,

none of this could alter the daughter I was.

But for these last weeks—

     —but for these last weeks

while I spoon-fed my mother and crushed pain

medicine into liquid drops on her tongue,

did things too intimate to say—the bathing

and changing she once did for me, that trapped

her so terribly—through all these labors she

seemed to be sleeping but sometimes unexpectedly

gripped my hand, and did not zoom away.

She left on her own recognizance. No final

confessions, still the untroubled brow, the oxygen

thanklessly pumping away. The rattle went quiet.

The pulse-ox fell to zero. At some point the thunder

had ceased, the storm passed over. I have

no recollection of a house filled with so much light.

The trees outside, so bright with rain. So much depends.

Here begins my life as no one's bad daughter.

Kingsolver, Barbara. "My Mother's Last Forty Minutes." How to Fly: In Ten Thousand Easy Lessons, Harper, 2020. 

You can read more about the author here. 

I wish you mindfulness, peace, some loving remembrances of loved ones, a clear heart, and lots of poetry as this week winds down.